2017年12月6日水曜日

自由英作ー別れ話をするとき

課題
You want to break up with your partner who you have dated for two years. How would you break up with her/him? Select one from the following four choices and explain the reason in English. 1) talk on the phone, 2) send an email , 3)write her/him a letter, 4) talk to her/him in person.

答案
I chose 4). 
My purpose is not to only break with him, but also understand a reason why I decided to do. the choices except for 4) is all one-sided opinion. I think these methods will let him feel lost. Instead, If I make arrangements for meeting, he and I will talk about complaint about each other -the discussion might be heated- to be able to understand each other.
Finally, we will be feel calm and chat over a cup of coffee with smile. Moreover, we might become close friends.

添削結果(添削依頼先:アイディー)
I chose 4).
My purpose is not only to break up with him, but also to help him understand why I decided to do so.
The choices except for 4) are all one-sided.
I think these methods will make him feel lost.
Instead, if I make arrangements to meet, he and I will talk about complaints about each other--the discussion might be heated--to be able to understand each other.
Finally, we will feel calm and chat over a cup of coffee with a smile.
Moreover, we might become close friends.

今後の課題
>a,the,複数形の最終確認
>主語、述語の対応があっているか確認
暗記
>one-sided
>i help him understand.


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