未添削英語構文100マスターブック 構文１

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英語構文100マスターブック　構文１　自由英作文

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添削前：It has been over a week since I finished writing my paper. I want to try to submit it my boss to get some suggestions to make it better. I have not discussed well with her ever because I become to feel scary during talking with her. I used to stop discussion and go back my room, even as I didn't get some suggestions. I don't have any reason why I felt so.  But something scary thing was exactly there. However, today, I abandon my hope that I and she can talk with smiles. I decided to bare the situation feared tofor me. I am going to fight with her. 

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